500 Word Friday Femdom Fiction: Slap

He’d spent forty-five miserable minutes sitting on the couch while she paced and slammed cabinet doors harder than she needed to, and got herself under control, and now it was time for the reckoning. The anger was gone, and it its place a certain sort of stern-hurt. In some ways he preferred the anger, but she never, ever punished in those rare moments when her temper surfaced, making him wait.

“I know you’ve though about what you said, and contrite as you are, you don’t really mean to take it back. Not yet. So I’m going to punish you.”

“Yes, Mistress.”

“I want you to stand for this. And think about what you said to me and why it was wrong.”

“Yes, Mistress.”

“Now relax your jaw a bit.”

She waited, watched to see he did as bid and her palm swung out and caught his cheek. “What you said was unacceptable.”

“I’m sorr…”

“Not another fucking word, you little cunt.”

For her there was a sort of dreamlike drift, her hands batting into his face, alternating cheeks: right, pause to see his jaw and neck were alright, left, pause, right, pause, left pause.

She could see he was contrite, but still stubborn, saw the hurt in his eyes and felt the slight sting in her palm. He thought she was being kind and didn’t understand why she was insulted and hurt, “Do you even know why you are being punished?”

“Because… I said a bad thing, Mistress? I won’t do it again if it bother you.”

“If it bothers you?” She echoed. “Bothers? What was it you said? You can never be what I want? You’re a loser, that I’m so together and I know what I’m doing while you will just fuck everything up? What sort of fucking bullshit is that?” She spat the words out like they were bullets.

She saw his head was still disagreeing, that he would lie to please her and reached out. “You are special.” Slap. “And beautiful.” Slap. “And mine.” Slap. A handful of hair on the back of his head made the handle she used to drag him into the bathroom, in front of the mirror. “What do you see?”

“It’s me, Mistress?” His reflection showed back a face strained with pain, his cheeks blushing from the slaps.

“Who does that… person in the mirror belong to?”

“You, Mistress?”

“Good. And do you say shit about anything else I own in my life?”

“No, Mistress, but…”

“Who accepted your submissive self?”

“You did, mistress. I’m really grateful that you…”

Her grip on his hair tightened again and her voice got loud in the small confines of the bathroom. “I’m not running a fucking charity. I don’t own you to martyr myself. I own you because you are special and precious to me. I don’t mind humiliating you. I like it.  But don’t you ever think for one minute you’re some burden I shouldn’t have.”

He was shocked out of further speech.

“Now you listen to me. No matter how bad it gets, I’m here for you.  and if you’re really grateful to be my slave, the least you can do is respect my authority on what I do and do not want. And we’re going to train you until you can honestly say you feel as worthy as I judge you to be.”

“Yes, Mistress.”

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This is a bit more clumsy, but sometimes in a D/s relationship it’s not just about silly bedroom fun, but about really loving the person and making it part of your communication. Different ways to say I love you for different people.

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9 Comments

  1. Miss Pearl, I find this very sweet.

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    • I’m glad! It’s partially inspired by things I’ve encountered, and partially by watching close friends, a D/s couple, bicker. The dynamic never leaves them, ever, but they still have to deal with all the stuff normal couples do.

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  2. “Different ways to say I love you for different people.”

    …and different ways to say, “How much do you love me?”

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  3. boyish man

     /  July 27, 2013

    A true love.

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  4. In my (albeit brief) experience with D/s, conflict resolution is both something I struggle with and is very telling in whether I can be truly submissive to someone. If I am able to be submissive though conflict resolution, that is a good sign. If not, I feel like I’m just playing at the idea of D/s but the dynamic isn’t there in the full effect I want in my relationships (or at least hasn’t grown to that point yet).

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    • I think some couples do the D/s through their arguments and some drop it. Me, if it’s important enough to argue rather than over ride the guy with my domliness, I am looking for his informed consent.

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  5. male servant

     /  July 30, 2013

    Love the Femdom character and the slapping scene, wish it was longer.

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  6. Digital Dan

     /  September 27, 2016

    I will now shamelessly comment over 3 years after everyone else on this short story. Ha.

    As an aspiring sub just starting out who has had to tangle with serious issues regarding perception of self-worth and potential, I found this story not only really sexy, but poignantly romantic. Touching. Inspiring.

    She shows him her love through domination, and shows him she owns him because he is worth owning, and is valuable enough to be owned by her. His admiration for her should thus be a reflection on himself. He, in his completeness, was chosen by her. Thus any insult he makes against his own perceived ‘nature’ as a person rebounds upon her, implicitly questions her judgement and insults her character in the company she keeps. She punishes him for doing this, to himself and to her by extension, and to get him to understand what ‘this’ is, and in the process manages to be kind and romantic in doing so.

    ” “You are special.” Slap. “And beautiful.” Slap. “And mine.” Slap. ”

    Speechless.

    I have an enthusiasm for erotica that gives the reader something new to think about coming away from it. That says something outside the confines of the story. This absolutely does.

    Thank you for writing it.

    -DD

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